The Glance of An Eye

One's first glance could lead to many thoughts,
Thoughts of love, attraction or even surprise, 
It's funny how your life could change with only a skip of a blink,
I saw you for the first time,
My heart leaped with excitement, 
Many glances were shared after that,
But never a conversation,
Down the hallways you walk, 
Ever making me feel timeless,
I constantly think about how my heart was sensitized by you,
Having making me feel mesmerized, 
The beauty of your face shined, 
But the beauty of your heart refreshed me like the morning sunshine, 
I think I'm falling, 
I think I'm falling fast,
Keeping my hopes up, 
Just enough to make it last, 
I'm falling deep, 
Deep, 
I'm falling in love with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 11:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Muitherero Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Really nice!
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:06 PM
enjoying this one again. PD
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November 15, 2015 at 10:34 PM
:) SKAT
Bocsa Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:48 PM
A beautiful love story between a poet and a wonderful poem.Best wishes.
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:51 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Samantha :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Samantha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:07 AM
So sweet, Samantha :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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January 24, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Thank you so much! That's actually the first poem I've ever written. :D
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