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The Giver

I give my love to everyone around me, those who need it more than I. I give my body for a moment of affection, The validation I crave deep within. I give my life to please everyone, Giving everything I refuse to give myself

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:36:00 PM

Lovely, Makayla ~

Deb M

Date: 6/29/2022 11:35:00 PM

Beautiful poem Makayla….you need to give some of that love to yourself as well though! Debx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/21/2022 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! A wonderful message for those who sacrifice for others, important to preserve ones self. :)Paulette

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/16/2022 7:46:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

David Drowley

Date: 5/15/2022 1:03:00 PM

Congratulations on an excellent introspective. Giving love is wonderful. But a gift of the same now and then is wonderful too.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/15/2022 10:44:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Makayla, with this well-written, introspective write! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 5/4/2022 7:52:00 PM

May you learn to tenderly nurture what seems from your poem a deeply hurting Individual.We are directed to love our neighbor as ourselves not more.We must love ourselves and then let that wonderful emotion branch outwardly.God first and above all and then our neighbor as our selves.Thanks for sharing your thoughts .