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The Girl of My Dreams

Your face, A majestic visualization of perfection, right in front of me. I feel like I am loosing you, losing you to the dark unknown , and I do not know how to respond. Should I be sad, or should I feel honored to have been in your presence for so long. We talked the day away, it made us numb to all the faults in the world. The cold weather reminds me of you. It reminds me of the times that you and I were together Now you are just a memory, a distant figment of my imagination that I hold so very close to my heart. I have been drinking every night, not enough to get me intoxicated, but enough to numb the pain of being deprived of you. You fled, like a criminal, away from me just as we became inseparable. E. L. Wald

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Date: 11/30/2014 8:29:00 AM
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:20:00 PM
EVAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:10:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Evan - I choose your first great and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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