The Girl I Love
In one look she packed a volume of desires,
in one simple smile she had lifetime of dreams,
in love she would surge a passion of fires,
she sang like birds amidst the lilting of streams,
Gods watched her closely, imitated her style,
heaven is a better place, thanks to her smile!
1st placement
written 19/09/2023
11 syllables each line
6 lines
Line Gauthier sponsored
Bite size poetry contest 72
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