The Girl At School Drops Her Pencil

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Pure bliss



NOTE: Hey everyone ... so I've been pretty busy these last few days, with packing, cleaning up, setting up yard-sales etc., so I'm gonna take a short break from posting and commenting ... but in the meantime feel free to enter my very first contest, March of the Footle. Curious to see how it goes ... happy writing!
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Giggles! (The dirty old man in me)
Hicks Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 11:58 AM
A dirty old man in fiery-haired girl's body ... you are always full of surprises!
Breidenthal Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Silly one! Bliss that the pencil offered ample distraction, eh? I love a good distraction. Always, Laura
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 8:44 PM
I thought I'd come back to your Footle page to thank you for my placement Timothy! Footles are such fun, I'm glad to have been honored in your contest! Thanks again!!
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:18 PM
No problem, Carrie. I thought your Driver's School poem to be very well thought out :) I enjoyed reading the diverse entries people sent in.
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:36 PM
And did the knight, Sir Tim, dive down to pick it up for her!:) ~ I see that you're busy...will go have a look at your contest when I finish answering mail. // paul
Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:32 AM
With anticipation and delight ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:25 PM
hahaha. LOVE your style!! (I wonder if S.O actually got it)
Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Not entirely sure ... you and Paul did though. The old "OOooops! Clumsy me. Dropped my pencil" gag ... hahaha.
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Note to Tim: Your contest will go splendidly. ;) Don't mark your prices too low-people will ask if you'll take less.
Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Good reminder, Lin. Always a lot of hagglers at yard-sales ... even for really silly stuff. "So it says 50 cents on the tag, but will you take a dime instead?" .... Crazy, if you ask me!
Davey Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Have fun packing up and stuff and we'll be waiting on your return
Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:18 AM
I'll be off and on --- still got two months before I have to leave the house, but it's good getting prepared early!
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