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The Girl and the Lion

There was a young shy girl 
warm heart as pure as pearl.
Gold spun hair, sweet bright smile, 
walks the length of the Nile.

The King of beast laid curled
in his lair from the world.
Rules days, nights as he sleeps, 
mate hunts while the sun weeps.

The girl walked on her route 
it took the wind right out 
of her sails. She sat down 
on warm dry leaves turned brown. 

Beast roared, his gaze yet drawn, 
he shook, gave a huge yawn.
She rose on her toes, glanced 
spun and swirl as she danced.

She lies on his gold mane,
her warm heart stole his reign.
Her gaze was on the sky
pale blue, while sun was shy.

2/8/2018

one syllable word - 6 word per line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Theraven Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Eve, What a wonderful dichotomy in nature and poem in six. -Richard
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:43 PM
You can sell this. Write more, great job, Eve. Fan of your work.
May Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
S     Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations to you Eve on your placement. A mangificent story cleverly constructed in the confines of the syllable structure. ~Judy
Gupta Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Congratulations, Eve on this nice win ...
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 11:20 AM
A wonderful fairy tale Eve, congratulations...
Y. Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Hi Eve, You have penned such beautiful tale. You are a great story teller. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Surprise, Surprise... I am back with well deserved congrats on your win, Eve.
One Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Great storytelling Eve.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Wow - lovely. A fairy tale for young and old. Beautiful, Eve.
Onclaud Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 1:00 PM
in 120 words, you created a superb story, eve... i am in awe!.. huggs
Kannan Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Wow.... Such a beautiful story Eve... Great imagery and lovely picture... Good luck in the contest...
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:50 AM
lovely poem, Eve. ever so touching.
Gupta Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Enjoyed the beautiful story so nicely told ... Should secure a nice place ...
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Good flow and a cute story well told..best for a win, Eve.
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