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There was a young shy girl warm heart as pure as pearl. Gold spun hair, sweet bright smile, walks the length of the Nile. The King of beast laid curled in his lair from the world. Rules days, nights as he sleeps, mate hunts while the sun weeps. The girl walked on her route it took the wind right out of her sails. She sat down on warm dry leaves turned brown. Beast roared, his gaze yet drawn, he shook, gave a huge yawn. She rose on her toes, glanced spun and swirl as she danced. She lies on his gold mane, her warm heart stole his reign. Her gaze was on the sky pale blue, while sun was shy. 2/8/2018 one syllable word - 6 word per line

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Date: 6/27/2021 10:39:00 AM
Eve, What a wonderful dichotomy in nature and poem in six. -Richard
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Date: 2/14/2018 5:43:00 PM
You can sell this. Write more, great job, Eve. Fan of your work.
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Date: 2/12/2018 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations to you Eve on your placement. A mangificent story cleverly constructed in the confines of the syllable structure. ~Judy
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on this nice win ...
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:20:00 AM
A wonderful fairy tale Eve, congratulations...
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:07:00 AM
Hi Eve, You have penned such beautiful tale. You are a great story teller. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:26:00 AM
Surprise, Surprise... I am back with well deserved congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:25:00 AM
Great storytelling Eve.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Date: 2/9/2018 6:24:00 PM
Wow - lovely. A fairy tale for young and old. Beautiful, Eve.
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Date: 2/9/2018 1:00:00 PM
in 120 words, you created a superb story, eve... i am in awe!.. huggs
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Date: 2/9/2018 11:41:00 AM
Wow.... Such a beautiful story Eve... Great imagery and lovely picture... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:50:00 AM
lovely poem, Eve. ever so touching.
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the beautiful story so nicely told ... Should secure a nice place ...
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Date: 2/9/2018 6:52:00 AM
Good flow and a cute story well told..best for a win, Eve.
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