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The Girl

She was very beautiful; she looked like a goddess. Her eyes were emerald, lips were red and sweet; but her shadow was absent! her image was absent in the mirror! Not many people who knew the REAL her, except for her victims who turned out to be like her; immortal at the expense of warm, fresh human blood. Her heart pulsated in excitement, as her fangs sunk into a man's neck; a man who had fallen trap to her sensual nature. A beautiful girl she was, but her past so dark, such that the darkness' texture could be felt!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/16/2014 6:15:00 PM
TEDDY, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/17/2014 12:20:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to see my work. I really appreciate it! <3 <3 ^_^
Date: 4/15/2014 8:00:00 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 3/18/2014 10:34:00 AM
wow, this sounds like me. Just kidding. Love Skat
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/19/2014 7:50:00 AM
Lolest!!!! Your name doen't smell like Dracula. :-)
Date: 3/17/2014 6:04:00 PM
Teddy, greatness in your words. The girl is darkness dress to the nines! my best, chuck
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/18/2014 6:08:00 AM
Thanks Chuck. Watch out for damsels in the night. lol.....
Date: 3/17/2014 1:16:00 PM
Hello Teddy, wow! I once knew a guy, who looked like the man of my dreams... I like the way you described THE GIRL. Almost the same way I described That one GUY! With a past so dark, the texture could be felt... Love this! LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/18/2014 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for your applause Linda. You are the best!!! ^_^
Date: 3/17/2014 10:21:00 AM
I can smell a blood... a blood of a real good poet ,,,,lol... this one's so nice.. I bet it's for a contest.. !! Good luck! ^__^
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/18/2014 4:24:00 AM
Lolest...... I like your good sense of humor. Thanks Aiyah!!!!! ^_^

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