The Girl

She was very beautiful;
she looked like a goddess.

Her eyes were emerald,
lips were red and sweet;
but her shadow was absent!
her image was absent in the mirror!

Not many people who knew the REAL her,
except for her victims who turned out to be 
like her; immortal at the expense of warm, fresh human blood.

Her heart pulsated in excitement,
as her fangs sunk into a man's neck;
a man who had fallen trap to her sensual nature.

A beautiful girl she was,
but her past so dark, such that the darkness' texture could be felt!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:15 PM
TEDDY, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Kimathi Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Thanks for stopping by to see my work. I really appreciate it! <3 <3 ^_^
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, teddy
Kimathi Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:34 AM
wow, this sounds like me. Just kidding. Love Skat
Kimathi Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Lolest!!!! Your name doen't smell like Dracula. :-)
Melugin Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Teddy, greatness in your words. The girl is darkness dress to the nines! my best, chuck
Kimathi Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Thanks Chuck. Watch out for damsels in the night. lol.....
A   Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Hello Teddy, wow! I once knew a guy, who looked like the man of my dreams... I like the way you described THE GIRL. Almost the same way I described That one GUY! With a past so dark, the texture could be felt... Love this! LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Thank you for your applause Linda. You are the best!!! ^_^
Torres Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 10:21 AM
I can smell a blood... a blood of a real good poet ,,,,lol... this one's so nice.. I bet it's for a contest.. !! Good luck! ^__^
Kimathi Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Lolest...... I like your good sense of humor. Thanks Aiyah!!!!! ^_^
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