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The Girl

There is something about her, the way she walks So graceful, eloquently smiling like a beautiful queen The way she lights up a room when she talks Her voice takes me to that place, unforeseen The place that only she and I have been I love her, and her name, oh! her name Ever since I first saw her, I've never been the same I am mesmerized by this masterpiece God has created, but I cannot be with her And the pain is sharp glass cutting into my soul And yet I must accept that her heart belongs to another I must keep my passion a secret, no one can know That I love this goddess, that she makes me whole I cannot help but scream her name "Juliette! I love you!" I proclaim

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 9:57:00 PM
love the win Carson ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/20/2014 10:41:00 AM
I'll say, it looks like you've really seen Juliette! Had a great time reading this one. Quite a depth of feeling it has.
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:30:00 PM
Carson congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/18/2014 6:03:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, carson
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Date: 2/10/2014 4:34:00 PM
Lovely, :)........ Carson, thank you for sharing the masterpiece God provided you with.. Much beauty and passion. xox~ SKAT
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Carson Searcy
Date: 2/11/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thank you! You really have inspired me! ~ Carson ~

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