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The Girl

I knew a girl once She played the victim very well Let you know how much her life sucked How it's a living hell I knew a girl once She pushed all this guys buttons very well Let him know how much pain she had It made him feel not so swell I knew a girl once She blamed all her problems on life Never once admitting That she was the cause of her strife I knew a girl once She never grew up and chose to live in her fantasy world The man in her life finally grew up And the woman remained a little girl I knew this girl And maybe you do too Just don't be conned into feeling sorry for her For she has put this "pain" on herself and you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/19/2011 5:22:00 PM
sounds like me ha ha
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Matt Hunt
Date: 5/19/2011 8:03:00 PM
Oh noes! lol
Date: 4/20/2011 6:42:00 PM
great write, creative and enjoyable you get a 7 but it is really a 10, thanks for sharing..
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:02:00 AM
i have known people like that. this was a great piece you wrote. thank you for reading and commenting on, Little Girl Grown, Made in Heaven, and Grandma's Rocking Chair and you keep posting these fine poems.
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