The Girl

I knew a girl once
She played the victim very well
Let you know how much her life sucked
How it's a living hell
I knew a girl once
She pushed all this guys buttons very well
Let him know how much pain she had
It made him feel not so swell
I knew a girl once
She blamed all her problems on life
Never once admitting
That she was the cause of her strife
I knew a girl once
She never grew up and chose to live in her fantasy world
The man in her life finally grew up
And the woman remained a little girl
I knew this girl
And maybe you do too
Just don't be conned into feeling sorry for her
For she has put this "pain" on herself and you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:22 PM
sounds like me ha ha
Hunt Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Oh noes! lol
Green Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:42 PM
great write, creative and enjoyable you get a 7 but it is really a 10, thanks for sharing..
Foulk Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 11:02 AM
i have known people like that. this was a great piece you wrote. thank you for reading and commenting on, Little Girl Grown, Made in Heaven, and Grandma's Rocking Chair and you keep posting these fine poems.
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