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This is about my sister who was just 5 years old when she got struck by a car. I was eight years old and the only witness at the scene. We were walking home from school when this tragedy occured. Watching her laying there helpless and barely alive still haunts me to this day. She had a broken pelvis, a ruptured spine, a broken arm and many other injuries. She spent a  full year in the hospital recovering, but by the grace of God she is now 60 years old and living a normal life. A true miracle!

The Girl The school The bell The street The run The car The screech The hit, the hit, the hit The tears The Ambulance The worry The scared The ride to- The hospital The nurses The doctors The prayers, the prayers, the prayers The tears The wait The hope The casts The healing The talk The walk The recovery The smile, the smile, the smile The tears The girl

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Date: 1/23/2024 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations. Glad to hear your sister is doing good!
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. I appreciate your thoughts :)
Date: 1/22/2024 9:21:00 PM
A true life story is written in a very dramatic way with selected few words. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thanks Chris...much appreciated!
Date: 1/22/2024 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write yet so sad for the pain/hurt. Yes, a true miracle. Miracles happen everyday but most people do not see them. Have a blessed day/week..............
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Paula. Yes, miracles do happen :) Blessings my dear friend.
Date: 1/22/2024 3:21:00 AM
Precious life. How could anyone read this and not feel it!
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette. Your comment made me smile :)
Date: 1/22/2024 2:11:00 AM
- Top win, Charlie ... Congratulations ! - hugs
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise...WoW! I was surprised and thrilled to see my awesome placement! Hugs // Charlie
Date: 1/22/2024 1:50:00 AM
Dear Charles, how traumatic is this experience, im so grateful and glad to read that your sister is fine now and living a normal life bit that incident must have left so many scare within her, so many flashbacks etc: you told us the story very well: congratulations on your win too: i can see why its a number one winner. Its soul hitting powerful, moving yet inspiring. Felt this
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/24/2024 10:41:00 PM
Dear Ink, thank you so much for your kind words. She is very lucky to even be alive, even to this day just thinking about it sends chills down my spine. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 6/8/2019 11:30:00 AM
Very touching, Charles. So glad there was a happy ending. Strong girl! Considerate brother.
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/24/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thank you, Line. She had an unbelievable will to survive. I do believe god had a hand in that. Nice to see you, dear friend.
Date: 3/31/2018 7:49:00 AM
Love it. Simple, but delivers the story...and a happy outcome.
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:32:00 PM
Hi again, thanks for liking this one. I witnessed the accident and thank god for the happy ending. // hugs Charlie
Date: 3/20/2018 9:53:00 AM
Imagery galore... So wonderful to hear such a young girl overcame such a tragic event...And enjoying every bit of life now... All the best
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Michael...I was with her when she got hit by the car. I was 8 years old at the time. An 18 year old boy who just got his license hit her. The lord was truly with her and my family that day. All the very best
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Michael...I was with her when she got hit by the car. I was 8 years old at the time. An 18 year old boy who just got his license hit her. The lord was truly with her and my family that day. All the very best

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