Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

The Gilded Leaves of Autumn Sigh

When fleeting storm said goodbye
The darkened sky detected a lie
Besting clouds her thoughts host
Drenching doubts that block riposte.

As the cobalt sky and ocean meet
On the sapphire arc revelers greet
The changing season's vibrant theme
In golden attire of autumn's dream.

The sound of wind whirls in trees
Musical tones of rustling leaves
And the falling foliage flies with ease
Orange hues in autumn's breeze.

As the sepia tones enchant her eye
The gilded leaves of autumn sigh
On buoyant horizon drifting high
Where crimson vistas touch the sky.

Vivid vibes spell a brand new start
As blazing colors awaken her heart
And amber passions begin to reveal
Tinges of magenta in love's appeal.

September 2, 2018
Placed first in One in five (II) poetry contest by Joseph May
Placed first in contest #560 by Brian Strand

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Quoth Theraven June 8, 2021 at 6:54 AM Vijay, So many seasons, so many leaves in Fall and in your 'love's appeal'. -Richard

Angela Crabtree December 20, 2020 at 3:06 PM A wonderful portrait of the season :)

Brandy Nicole February 18, 2019 at 10:16 PM Your words shine. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Edward Ibeh February 17, 2019 at 12:47 PM Wonderful write, Vijay!:-) Congrats on your win! I remember writing a poem with the exact same title, but I lost it for good when this site crashed late last year:-(

Heidi Sands February 17, 2019 at 8:50 AM Congratulations Vijay! :)

Line Gauthier February 17, 2019 at 7:58 AM Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win.

Deb Radke October 30, 2018 at 1:42 PM I love this, Vijay. And congratulations on your first place achievement. I agree with so many comments below and join my praise to theirs. This is beautiful. Take care. Deb Vijay Pandit October 30, 2018 at 3:38 PM Many thanks Deb..appreciate the kind feedback.

Vladislav Raven October 12, 2018 at 8:34 AM Hi Vijay, firstly, congratulations on your win in this contest. Your word did read as a winner as I beheld such beautiful lines. It was a pleasure to read such an excellent write my friend. This gem is a fave, your words painted such exquisite imagery in my mind. You paint such an incredible picture with such beautiful words. This is a fabulous fave my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Vijay Pandit October 12, 2018 at 8:51 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate your generous comments.

Suzanne Delaney October 7, 2018 at 5:31 AM Gorgeous Autumn poem, I especially like “The changing season's vibrant theme In golden attire of autumn's dream.” Keep on writing. Hugs, SuZ Vijay Pandit October 7, 2018 at 6:46 AM Appreciate the generous feedback..many many thanks, SuZ.

CayCay Godwin September 30, 2018 at 3:27 PM This poem was surely heaven scent thru your talent and deserves a top spot on the ALL TIME favorites list. Its beauty is crisp, exciting to my poetry adrenaline and worthy of ovation. Your poem was my joy from word one. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Vijay Pandit October 1, 2018 at 5:59 PM I am delighted by your comments CayCay. You know how to bring smiles..many thanks for your feedback.

Jan Allison September 21, 2018 at 7:45 AM what a beautiful autumnal poem Vijay and I see congrats are in order on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit September 25, 2018 at 10:11 AM Thank you Jan..appreciate the visit and comments.

Darlene De Beaulieu September 20, 2018 at 8:47 AM Hello Vijay Pandit, the only good thing about autumn is the leaves change color. We enjoy this scene for as long as it last. But then the leaves begin to fall, then we have the chore to rake them up. Bag the leaves and bring to the dump. Have a nice day my friend. Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:52 PM Thank you Darlene.

Pandita Sietesantos September 20, 2018 at 8:28 AM Just swinging back to extend BIG congrats on your top win, my friend! Well-deserved as usual! Love and hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM Thank you Pandita.

Brandy Nicole September 19, 2018 at 9:59 PM Once again, your words dance along the page with beauty. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM Thank you Brandy.

Joseph May September 19, 2018 at 8:08 PM Beautiful colors of the season..Congrats on your win Vijay.. Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM Thank you Joseph.

Heidi Sands September 18, 2018 at 4:48 PM Congratulations for being on best new popular poem list :) yay Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM Thank you Heidi.

Warren Doll September 17, 2018 at 11:50 AM Brilliant Autumn rhyme, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 20, 2018 at 1:50 PM Thank you Warren.

Gary Bateman September 8, 2018 at 6:01 AM Hello Vijay, A very beautiful description of Autumn's sigh. Your words and concomitant imagery, and the overarching metaphor of your Rhyme portray a most wondrous word picture of this radiant season in the divine praise of Mother Nature herself. Extraordinary Work!! A FAVE!! Cheers, Gary Vijay Pandit September 8, 2018 at 6:52 AM Your in depth comments are always special, Gary..you take the time to reflect. Your kindness flows in your words. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole September 4, 2018 at 9:32 PM I truly enjoy the beauty of Autumn's touch. The color of every leaf that has fallen. You paint such vivid images with your words. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 5, 2018 at 7:01 AM Thank you Brandy..I really appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments.

Pandita Sietesantos September 4, 2018 at 1:12 PM Such a beautiful piece, you have penned, Vijay! What wonderful imagery, full of amazing colours! This is already a winner, my friend! Best regards. Pandita Vijay Pandit September 4, 2018 at 4:51 PM Glad to read your comments, Pandita..thanks for the visit and compliments, my friend.

Joanna Daniel September 4, 2018 at 3:14 AM This is extremely brilliant poetry, Vijay, sure to place high:) Vijay Pandit September 4, 2018 at 6:59 AM Thank you Jo...I am happy to read your comments.

Paul Callus September 3, 2018 at 3:45 PM You capably appeal to our senses through your rich imagery, Vijay! Autumn can be very inspiring. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit September 4, 2018 at 6:57 AM You are so right about the autumn's inspiration..many thanks Paul for your kind feedback. Regards.

Winged Warrior September 3, 2018 at 8:22 AM Did I ever tell you that you are a great poet Vijay...well I'm telling you now!...a Fav my friend...love & light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit September 4, 2018 at 6:56 AM You are so kind my friend--many thanks for the compliments.

Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2018 at 5:06 AM I so love the title you chose. You poetry has cast a spell over me. An incantation of heightened fantasy. Love it. Vijay Pandit September 3, 2018 at 7:33 AM You are so generous with your feedback my friend..many thanks, Pixie.

M. L. Kiser September 2, 2018 at 11:01 PM Another "fav" of mine, Vijay; I especially love the flow and the color descriptions; excellent imagery! Vijay Pandit September 3, 2018 at 7:31 AM Thank you M.L.K. Appreciate the kind words.

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