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The Gift That I Give You

You, my son, are tall-grown now, Yet, purity in you is seen, somehow; You have pals many esteeming you, Assuring to abide eternally near you; You feel a vague shyness to face me, Though, surely, you awfully love me; I don’t feel hurt for your way, any way, As I was once just the same way; You’ve attained your sixteen today, Your boyhood slowly fading away; You’ll have, many revels of the same, That should, surely, be your aim; I’ve got your room well adorned; To celebrate this day full-fledged; Best of clothes, edibles, and cake, All well-prepared for your sake; Mom has surprises for you as well, I know you’ll like them very well; Though I’m not on the rich-men-list, I know I can give you my very best; Many are delightfully gift-packed, Attractive too as they are purchased; There is a no-packed unseen thing, You may not tangibly see or feeling; That’s the love from my heart, my son, Hovering over all the gifts finely seen; That tells you always I’m for you, I’ve loved; and always will love you… 05 July 2021

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Date: 7/22/2021 1:49:00 PM
Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats. The love of a parent is most important thing in a child's life. Sara
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Date: 7/19/2021 7:44:00 PM
A lovely testament! Congrats!
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Date: 7/19/2021 9:14:00 AM
Chris, what a beautiful gift you have written for your son on his sixteenth birthday! I know he will treasure this all of his life! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/19/2021 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserved contest win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:44:00 PM
A great poem that reveals your love for your beloved son, Christuraj, great take on the theme:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/5/2021 7:19:00 AM
A heart touching write. Love is the best gift of all. All the best for contest
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/5/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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