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The Gift That I Give You

My words are birds set free, to glide and to soar on the wind, with all my deep love and grief twined. I write when storms wake me, and pour out my blood red stained ink, 'till dawns hazy turns pastel pink. There is great beauty and there are scars that dwell in my soul, and on this journey I set sail for my true north on waves that roll. Poetry is my gift, the gift I leave with you always. even when I have no more days. Remember, life is a delicate flower and a moment in time, a fragile seed, a fragment, so I write words that chime, and this is the gift I leave with you. ____________________ July 1, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/The Gift That I Give You Copyright Protected, ID 07-1368-236-01 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The Gift That I Give You sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 07/06/2021 Seventh Place

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Date: 7/8/2021 6:53:00 AM
Lovely writing. Congrats and God bless you with love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 7/9/2021 5:03:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/7/2021 8:56:00 PM
This kind of gift is an eternal legacy that will perpetuate in the hearts of the receiver… Congratulations..
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:56:00 AM
JCB, thank you for the comment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/7/2021 7:59:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 8:12:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the congrats and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/6/2021 11:55:00 PM
A wonderful gift you have to give Constance. Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem…Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 8:13:00 AM
Belle, thank you for the comment, congratulations and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/6/2021 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win and thanks for sharing your poetic gifts!!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 8:13:00 AM
Krish, thank you for the congrats and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/6/2021 8:15:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 8:14:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/3/2021 4:54:00 AM
Constance, the gift you leave is truly a wonderful gift. Beautifully expressed. ~Charlie
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Constance La France
Date: 7/3/2021 12:20:00 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/2/2021 10:51:00 AM
Yes Constance, thank you for sharing your talented gift!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/2/2021 8:47:00 PM
James, thank you for the comment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/1/2021 11:04:00 PM
That's a wonderful gift to leave behind, Constance, superb poem:)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/2/2021 8:47:00 PM
Jo, thank you for the comment and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/1/2021 10:43:00 PM
Beautiful! This one will be difficult to beat!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/2/2021 8:46:00 PM
Seeker, thank you for the compliment on my poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/1/2021 5:06:00 PM
Constance, you have produced a superb poem; your words vibrate and flow, creating a fantastic magical feeling; this is one of my favorites. "There is great beauty, and there are scars that dwell in my soul, " I like this poem. Best wishes for the contest and greetings
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Date: 7/2/2021 8:45:00 PM
Lasaad, thank you for the compliment on my poem and the great comment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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