Heidi Sands Poet Monorhyme

The Gift Is Today

You do not have to pay, to have fun play
To live in today and dance as you may
To make way for those who are in dismay
To have faith and pray for love not to stray
To choose what to say from the heart to stay
To be what you may, the gift is today

Heidi Sands

1/5/17 

*Placed 7th in Contest: Rhymers Delight/Internal Rhyme

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Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 4:02 PM Anticonsumerism! Like it! Congrats Heidi! :-) Heidi Sands January 12, 2017 at 4:04 PM Thank you Mark! Happy you like it :)

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:12 PM A great poem with good internal/ending Monorhymes, Heidi! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Heidi Sands January 10, 2017 at 7:18 PM Thank you so much Sandra! Heidi Sands January 10, 2017 at 7:14 PM Thank you so much Sandra!

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:55 PM Back with congratulations, Heidi...well done! // paul Heidi Sands January 10, 2017 at 4:02 PM Hi Paul. Thank you very much :)

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:58 PM Simple & sweet. Congratulations! Heidi Sands January 10, 2017 at 7:56 AM Thank you :)

Paul Callus January 7, 2017 at 6:40 AM You have done really well, Heidi. You have capably done a double monorhyme, combining end and internal rhyme. Not at all easy! // paul Heidi Sands January 7, 2017 at 7:55 AM Thank you very much Paul! I appreciate your comment :)

Vera Duggan January 6, 2017 at 10:30 PM Hi Heidi, another mono rhyme, I have read a few of them today and I must honestly say I do like them all and once again this is no exception, they have all been good, very well written my friend......Take care.......Vera Heidi Sands January 7, 2017 at 7:54 AM Thank you so much Vera! :)

Roy Pett January 6, 2017 at 7:05 PM You certainly have a gift Heidi, such a difficult form of poetry, very well written and a joy to read. Heidi Sands January 7, 2017 at 7:54 AM Thank you for such a kind comment Roy :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 6, 2017 at 9:39 AM Cool inspiration this poem is, Heidi. Good flow and nice vibe, makes this poem a winner. Love and hugs to you, dear. Heidi Sands January 6, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thank you Freddie. !

Edward Mccall January 6, 2017 at 7:58 AM Good morning Heidi. I love this poem,and I love the way you set it up from the second line on. To live To make way To have faith To choose To be what you may It's beautiful Heidi and in it goes. :)":)" Good luck in the contest. Heidi Sands January 6, 2017 at 8:11 AM Good morning Edward! Thanks so much :)

Vincent Flannery January 5, 2017 at 7:33 PM Beautiful piece Heidi. Such simple truth we should all obey. Great title, drew me right in and reverberated throughout. Heidi Sands January 6, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thank you Vincent :)

Charmaine Chircop January 5, 2017 at 4:02 PM What a beautiful positive poem dear Heidi.Its what my ears needed to hear..and what my heart yearned to feel..Joy. Heidi Sands January 5, 2017 at 4:04 PM That is great to hear! Thanks, Charmaine :)

Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 3:45 PM And the gift is also your beautiful poetry. This is perfect for the contest and I wish you nothing but the best my sweet friend. Everyday is a new and wonderful gift. Heidi Sands January 5, 2017 at 3:54 PM Thanks Chris! I appreciate your kindness :)