The Gift

Old friend you came where grass is dewed, 
Dear friend, you came to start anew
A rooster crows announcing you
I stretch and yawn, and wash my face
and shuffle down to start the race

Dear friend, beyond the window's view
the dark has left, and worries too,
the bacon sizzles, the paper comes,
Old friend, I'm glad to welcome you


I let the dog out in the sun
I felt a shiver, in my bones
but soon it leaves, the chill is gone
The coffee is here to share with you

You level out, with revelry, 
Your beauty takes my breath away

Old friend! Gold sunrise of the skies,
You peak, and nod while passing by
You come each day to warm my face
You race across the time and space

Old, brilliant friend, of rising sun…reviver of my soul!
Over the rooftop, over my lawn, over the crest of the early dawn

Warming,………greeting,…………….skimming along…….

You come each day, to warm my face, a built-in compass knows the way
From morning’s journey, long past noon, from east to west, a well worn path
You race across the time and space, an ancient clock, while keeping pace

And as the twilight comes too soon, you blaze a trail with redder hues
Although I know how soon you’ll go… I wonder why I miss you so…?

My brilliant friend, the setting sun, it’s time to wave a sad goodbye
I wonder why, at end of day, you play for me, a sadder song?

Old friend, I’m here, in silent awe, to watch you burn away

Slowly………fading………………………………………gone



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9/9/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Fantastic! Congratulations.
Walker  Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations Carrie. You placed high girlfriend with this superlative response to "The Gift." Verlena
Ryerson Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:17 AM
I wish I was a 'morning person' like you! I'm an old grouch and don't even SPEAK to me til I've had my third cup of coffee...Written with your usual elegant, graceful and unmistakable style...Congratulations are most definitely in order here my friend! - Tim
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:04 PM
I love this. Congratulations. Love and Prayers, Gina
A   Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Nice win...PD
Gibson Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Absolutely gorgeous!! Congratulations, Carrie.
Posey Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Great win, darlin" ...... I can't remember reading better writing.... Truly deserved.... Love Ya...... Jake
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Congrats on the top win, Carrie.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations, Carrie, on a magnificent win! Excellent write! Our Sun is a true gift indeed! Pandita
Yvonne Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Another masterpiece. Jaw dropping.
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