The Gift

I found a rusted trunk 
Accidently, in a corner of 
My storage room 
Eagerly I opened it 
That was filled with my textbooks 
Almost of the elementary school 
Most of its were white ants eaten 
Except the top of a peacock feather 
A gift given my girlfriend at the school 
Now the past becomes present 
Remember the green eyed girl 
And the moments we spend beside lily ponds 
Fishing in shallow river 
Playing in muds under the rain 
And many many 
that makes me happy now 
a relief from the boring life now .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/13/2012 12:00:00 PM
Memories can be so rich and satisfying, making a boring life palatable, although I don't think you're bored when you can write pieces like this! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 12:19:00 PM
thank you for your kind words .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 8:11:00 AM
Love the imagery here from start to finish!! regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 6/13/2012 9:25:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 8:03:00 AM
this is beautiful, and i love your name it's beautiful as well, jayachandran! Thanks for sharing and are you new to p.s.? i hope you like it! =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 6/13/2012 9:26:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 6:19:00 AM
OH...You found today`s treasure chest of happy memories, nice. - Well done poem, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/13/2012 6:56:00 AM
thank you dear poetess .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 6:16:00 AM
Peace be with you my friend.
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Date: 6/13/2012 6:57:00 AM
thank you dear poet .jk
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