The Ghost Train

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Along the mountain pine valley did the Iron Horse roar,
A steam belching black demon, burning red hot coals
Within it's steel belly.
Speed's hell bound creation, driven by greed's insatiable hunger,
Faster, faster it moves at acceleration rush, to
Achieve manifest destiny's final arrival on time.
In the distance hear another lone whistle blow, spitting,
And spewing with brimstone's gray smoke.
This indeed is the devil's train, carrying the forsaken,
To the depot of no return.
With a half empty payload aboard, Satan makes a deadly
Judgment call, stoke up those engines boys, ramming
Speed if you please.
Made man beasts are these mechanical monsters
Of destructions, lethal death weapons, chained
Down to the steel rails, and iron pikes.
Ebony stallion's racing against the winds,
As redden sparks sizzle and bite at the crisp autumn
Air, bellowing fumes poisoning the night.
The engineer of the 10; 15 out of Tombstone,
Checked his pocket watch, speaking impatiently,
He did so yell out, come along fellow's, we have a
Schedule to keep, and we've hours behind in our dead line,
So let’s pick up the pace.
Now the devil's train came out of know where,
With hell's supernatural master at the wheel,
Heckling, and laughing, relishing in the carnage’s
Utter calamity to come.
On a lone chewed up mangled piece of track,
Lies wreckages debris blood, flesh and twisted metal,
Lain stewned for miles beside the wild wilderness.
Broken bones, and sheared off limbs, weeping mother's
Cradling limp, lifeless bodies, crying why, God almighty
Why?
But the lord and heavenly father, had nothing to do,
With this unnatural disaster, nay the devil had many
Empty spaces to fill, and his passengers list was lean.
So he leveled the crimson ground with his dark gavel,
Taking souls at high velocities supernatural speed,
For this is the devil's ghost train, and it is so
Hell bound.

BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/24/2015 3:21:00 AM
Loved this fast moving evocative piece!.- More power to your pen Cheryl!. Best Regards my friend!.
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Date: 10/30/2014 10:28:00 AM
A 7+++ Cheri aka: Fangoria -- My Queen of Darkness!! Congratulations on Poem of the Day and a FAV. Cheers, Gary
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:34:00 PM
Love this ghost train Cheri ....congrats on the feature....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/29/2014 8:22:00 PM
You are such a great story teller! Grats on poem of the day :) :)
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Date: 10/29/2014 6:04:00 PM
Reminded me of a battle of wills trying to survive. Check out following regarding Veterans Day. I am at VMI in first picture and second big one is my son Shawn Horn at Ft. Benning, GA. http://www.story-telling-around-the-world.com/Military-Memories.html
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Date: 10/29/2014 2:59:00 PM
Now, that's a chiller! Had me on the edge of my seat. Excellent and congrats!
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:43:00 AM
Congrats Cherl, on this being chosen POD. Your imagination runs riot and you give us an other entertaining horror poem where carnage is on top of the list. / paul
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the Day! A good one for Haloween!
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Date: 10/29/2014 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations Cheryl for being featured as the poem of the day... Verlena
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Date: 10/29/2014 10:17:00 AM
congratulations cherl dear pal well deserved excellent pen fine write
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Date: 10/29/2014 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on getting poem of the day Cheryl, Wow! This was a very good one; your imagination is just wonderful. :) hugs and love eve
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Date: 10/29/2014 4:38:00 AM
- A really well written poem for Halloween - Congrats with today's ("scary") poem, dear Cherl !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2014 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being chosen poem of the day.
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Date: 10/29/2014 2:58:00 AM
What a masterpiece you have written cheri. You have a natural flair for the macabre.
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Date: 10/28/2014 2:06:00 AM
Another riveting chilling tale pouring in prose form from your magical golden pen, Cheryl. Halloween is fast approaching us , is almost upon us, my dear friend...Lol....Excellent write! I loved it! ;) Hugs and love! xxxx D.
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Date: 10/27/2014 10:46:00 PM
Wonderful pic painted here Cheryl,, rather a video I must say,cud get back into memories wid ur captivating write n watched the whole travel show! Great message in last half! God bless us all n save from this ghost train!
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