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The ghost of passion

The ghost of passion swirls in my soul he who elicited it all from me has fled this earthly place his corporeal self still haunts my days and my nights consoling and bringing tears a new Impossible pain is grief memories wrapped in longing sprinkled with thoughts of missed opportunities and guilt from paths not chosen and yet its all I have of him now

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/23/2023 10:28:00 AM

Sometimes as time flies and when we lose loved ones, it is the memories swirling in the midst of all that remain as the only thing we can keep close to our heart. I felt so much, reading this very poignant and touching write that depicts grief and loss in such an eloquent manner, i especially loved the lines “ memories wrapped in longing sprinkled with thoughts of missed opportunities“ your way with phrasing thoughts is so poetic. And soul stirring. Pleasure reading you. Sending you light

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 5:02:00 PM

such a poignant poem about the loss of a loved one. These words struck a chord with me: "his corporeal self still haunts my days and nights...impossible pain is grief I understand how the memories of the lost loved one can great feeling of guilt. Such a heavy burden to carry. My heart goes out to you, hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2023 12:11:00 PM

This poignant poem captures the complex emotions surrounding the loss of a loved one and the enduring presence of their memory. The speaker's use of evocative language creates a vivid portrayal of the lingering impact of a departed soul... It beautifully captures the enduring impact of love and loss. It eloquently expresses the bittersweet nature of memories, the ache of grief, and the intricate emotions that accompany the absence of a cherished person..

Silent One
Date: 12/22/2023 12:11:00 PM

The ghost of passion becomes a haunting yet consoling presence, creating a nuanced portrayal of the complex tapestry of emotions woven by the memory of a departed loved one