The Ghost Bar

THE GHOST BAR

gangrenous chains
rusted and burdensome
lambast the oak plank
etching ethereal gouges

the serpentine length drags
with warlike screams

ghoulish intensity
grabs each bony-disk
with heartlessness

the ice cold floor and
daggered eyes, seem
but a hallucination
to the drunken lot

but the barmaid sees!
she screams
as the breathless apparition
howls with wrathful laughter
she faints, fast and dreadful

the chains coil about his neck
in retribution for his act
yanking him about

the floor gives way like quicksand
and he plummets yet again
to certain death
covered by miles and miles of clanging chain

the barmaid’s brought about by salts
she tells the tale over and over again
until the legend of the ghost bar
becomes famous

detailed in rusty chains and eyes

...one peeks through

10/23/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/23/2017 10:35:00 PM
Your eloquent, vivid and image creating words give an icy frisson to the imagination. Very effective and adept writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Geoffrey!
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