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The Ghost Bar

THE GHOST BAR gangrenous chains rusted and burdensome lambast the oak plank etching ethereal gouges the serpentine length drags with warlike screams ghoulish intensity grabs each bony-disk with heartlessness the ice cold floor and daggered eyes, seem but a hallucination to the drunken lot but the barmaid sees! she screams as the breathless apparition howls with wrathful laughter she faints, fast and dreadful the chains coil about his neck in retribution for his act yanking him about the floor gives way like quicksand and he plummets yet again to certain death covered by miles and miles of clanging chain the barmaid’s brought about by salts she tells the tale over and over again until the legend of the ghost bar becomes famous detailed in rusty chains and eyes ...one peeks through 10/23/2017

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Date: 10/23/2017 10:35:00 PM
Your eloquent, vivid and image creating words give an icy frisson to the imagination. Very effective and adept writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Geoffrey!

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