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I broke my ankle badly yesterday in a fall. I had no intention of going back to work at all. A friend offered her holiday house for me stay. I accepted immediately as I needed to get away. I arrived to a little cabin all cozy and neat. On the mat ‘Welcome, Please, wipe your feet.’ Inside it was furnished in old world style. Looked like no one had been there for a while. Limping, I dragged all my luggage inside, And went round opening all the curtains wide. Outside was silent and still, not hearing a peep. I could see it would be easy to get some sleep. I started a fire and then fixed a quick snack. My foot on a stool and I reclined right back. Through the window I peaked, a man was there. At first all I could do was stand and stare. He knocked hard so I opened the door He politely asked, “What are you here for?” “I live here, well no, my friend owns this place.” “Ahh, you know my sister? Is that the case? Did she tell you that her brother, part-owner, Chooses to stay here and be quite a loner?” I replied “There is only one bed, you cannot stay.” “You are harsh, I have come quite a long way.” “Well I guess I cant kick a part owner out. Sleep on the sofa and only quietly move about.” “You know you are lucky that I am here. It’s on the radio about an escaped convict to fear. Being a strong man I will protect you from harm. So you can stay relaxed and feel very calm.” “Well that is fine but I don’t yet know your name.” “Hasn’t my sister mentioned my name? That’s a shame. My name is Jackson, but I prefer Jack, How do you do?” “I am Geraldine, but Gerry if its all the same to you, Here are blankets and pillows, Anything you need? I am off to bed, I seem to be very tired indeed.” I went to bed, my friend called my cell phone. She said “How’s my friend who is accident-prone? Did you find everything, is there anything you lack?’ “Well, I found your brother” “I don’t have a brother” she answered back.

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Date: 7/25/2023 8:47:00 PM
Hearty Congratulations on your shining first place win dear SV.
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Date: 7/25/2023 11:16:00 PM
Thnx so much Valsa.
Date: 7/25/2023 3:22:00 PM
Gulp! Queue opening credits. Not too much light glinting off the knife in the shadows. Stuff Netflix… it’s Hollywood or bust. Congrats on a marvellous win ‘Speaky’. Terry
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Date: 7/26/2023 12:41:00 AM
Her name was Tara. Everybody thinks their own dog is the best in the world, but Tara was very special indeed. Lost her some nine years ago and not sure another could ever hold a candle to her. When it comes to the nickname, I never know what to call people who have ‘other’ names so maybe I’ve just come up with the eighth dwarf… hmmm… I feel a poem coming on ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2023 6:59:00 PM
Hey Terry I love the new nick name. Glad you like my story. My English teacher in year 10 told us "Always leave em wanting more" But my Granddaughter tells me I should under promise and over deliver. Thanks for the great comment Terry .. I have been meaning to ask if its your dog, he is a beaut. Best wishes from Speaky
Date: 7/25/2023 8:54:00 AM
Great story, congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/25/2023 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 7/25/2023 5:34:00 AM
Lovely story. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Christuraj. I really appreciate your lovely comments.
Date: 7/25/2023 1:17:00 AM
SV, this story had me hooked completely, hope it has a part two where it ends happily:) loved the fun:) congratulations on top win:)
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Date: 7/25/2023 1:49:00 AM
I'll make you a deal, hold another short story contest and I'll write you a sequel and I wont even make you give me a place, :) But thanks for this win, its really appreciated.
Date: 7/13/2023 10:44:00 AM
I thought it would be scary, but it turned out funny.
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Date: 7/13/2023 12:42:00 PM
It depends on your imagination Jay. If you see it as funny, then its funny. Glad you made time to read it and comment. Thank you.
Date: 7/12/2023 9:00:00 PM
What an intriging story . From start to finish you captured my attention and in the end what a shock. We are left in doubt.... is he a ghost or an escaped convict or a rogue who has some hidden agenda..... all left to speculations and assumptions. Great narration SV
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Date: 7/12/2023 11:12:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it Valsa. Your brilliant imagination will finish it better than i could. Cheers. SV
Date: 7/12/2023 6:25:00 PM
A marvellous story/poem with a surprising ending, scary… Belle
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Date: 7/12/2023 11:11:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Belle. Thank you for letting me know. Best wishes from SV
Date: 7/12/2023 1:46:00 PM
- A wonderful story ... with an unexpected ending ... I hope the "brother" fell into a deep sleep and she drove home in silence in the middle of the night ... :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/12/2023 3:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise. I love your comment. Hugs right back !
Date: 7/12/2023 1:26:00 PM
You're such a good story teller :) hopefully not one of your true ones...
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Date: 7/12/2023 3:23:00 PM
LOL No this one entirely fiction. Thanks for the comment DD

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