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The Gates

Lost consciences are passing the gates to divide the Kafkaesque instincts of freedom.

Valeria Iliadou
"One Amazing Line"

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Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2010 at 3:18 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 9:05 AM

I'll have to go back to Kafka to see what my lost consciences are doing. Well written, Valeria. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Francine Roberts

December 15, 2010 at 9:00 AM

congrats on your win in Constance's contest Valeria

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2010 at 8:36 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valeria! Peace and joy! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 15, 2010 at 4:07 AM

Congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2010 at 10:04 PM

Congratulations, VAlersia! A mystical feeling to this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 7:52 PM

Congrats Valeria on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory tonight with luv..

John Freeman

December 14, 2010 at 6:11 PM

Congratulations Valeria on your worthy poem's honored presentation. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

December 14, 2010 at 2:47 PM

Many congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 8, 2010 at 4:28 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Valeria. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol