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The Gates

Lost consciences are passing the gates to divide the Kafkaesque instincts of freedom. Valeria Iliadou "One Amazing Line"

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 9:05:00 AM

I'll have to go back to Kafka to see what my lost consciences are doing. Well written, Valeria. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 9:00:00 AM

congrats on your win in Constance's contest Valeria

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valeria! Peace and joy! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations, VAlersia! A mystical feeling to this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:52:00 PM

Congrats Valeria on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory tonight with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations Valeria on your worthy poem's honored presentation. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:47:00 PM

Many congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2010 4:28:00 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Valeria. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 5:13:00 PM

Good one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/7/2010 3:22:00 PM

Nice image- Kafkawsque instincts. valeria. good luck