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THE GATES

Lost consciences are passing the gates to divide the Kafkaesque instincts of freedom. Valeria Iliadou "One Amazing Line"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/16/2010 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2010 9:05:00 AM
I'll have to go back to Kafka to see what my lost consciences are doing. Well written, Valeria. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 12/15/2010 9:00:00 AM
congrats on your win in Constance's contest Valeria
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valeria! Peace and joy! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations, VAlersia! A mystical feeling to this one.
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:52:00 PM
Congrats Valeria on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations Valeria on your worthy poem's honored presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:47:00 PM
Many congratulations Valeria on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James
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Date: 12/8/2010 4:28:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Valeria. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:13:00 PM
Good one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:22:00 PM
Nice image- Kafkawsque instincts. valeria. good luck
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