The Gatekeeper

On Boondoggle street
thrives a magic store
anyone who enters disappears
except the old dear
who minds the counter
who never enters or leaves
whose eyes are sharp as twin tacks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Hello Vince Gullaci, now that is great! A mystery in a poem. I like it! I like it! I like it. have anice evening my friend.
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April 16, 2018 at 5:21 AM
A fantastic,mighty comment.A breath of fresh air. Thank you Darlene, Vince.
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