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The Gardener

Landing on petals, Buzzing through fragrant stamens: Pollination chores.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Lawrence Ingle
Date: 11/16/2009 9:42:00 PM
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I know it could be a human being, or a bumble bee, or a leprechaun, but just the same I love it Raul...keep up the great writing..I've been away for awhile, though I still want to thank you dearly for all of your past comments on some of my past featured poems...friends in poetry...lawrence ingle in lou. ky.
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Marty Owens
Date: 11/8/2009 8:18:00 PM
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Very nice Raul...Enjoyed...Marty
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/5/2009 6:57:00 AM
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Thank you Raul for sharing your writing with us today. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Love, Carol
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 11/5/2009 6:42:00 AM
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Beatiful haiku, Raul, and very descriptive too... enjoyed... keep sharing more ... and often... thankxxx for the many nice comments from you on my poetry pieces ... much appreciated.. Linda-Marie, P.E. P.S. "Sweetheart" ..have u checked out HGarvey Daniel Esquire Daffy Definitions yet? much fun... hope u participate...
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Lena Townsend
Date: 11/4/2009 11:44:00 PM
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You never need to say it outright as your words leave such a precise image. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful writing. As always it is prefection. Smiles from Lolita
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James Fraser
Date: 11/4/2009 3:50:00 PM
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Many a landing has pollinated many >> nice Haiku Raul >> James
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Date: 11/4/2009 2:08:00 PM
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You certainly know how to pack much into this concise form. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/4/2009 1:40:00 PM
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Fruiting is the end result of pollination....lovely Haiku Raul ,im enjoying reading it on this WEDNESDAY night..,excellent--Charma
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John Freeman
Date: 11/4/2009 8:41:00 AM
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Excellent Haiku, Raul, busy, busy, bee. Sincerely, Moses
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Carrie Richards
Date: 11/4/2009 7:14:00 AM
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He is quite a busy little bee.....what would we do without such a hard worker? Enjoyed this! ~ Carrie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2009 5:48:00 AM
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Nicely done Haiku. Those little insects that spread the pollin have their work cut out for them. Keep writing. Sara
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