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The Gardener

Landing on petals,
Buzzing through fragrant stamens:
Pollination chores.

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Lawrence Ingle

November 16, 2009 at 9:42 PM

I know it could be a human being, or a bumble bee, or a leprechaun, but just the same I love it Raul...keep up the great writing..I've been away for awhile, though I still want to thank you dearly for all of your past comments on some of my past featured poems...friends in poetry...lawrence ingle in lou. ky.

Marty Owens

November 8, 2009 at 8:18 PM

Very nice Raul...Enjoyed...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 5, 2009 at 6:57 AM

Thank you Raul for sharing your writing with us today. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 5, 2009 at 6:42 AM

Beatiful haiku, Raul, and very descriptive too... enjoyed... keep sharing more ... and often... thankxxx for the many nice comments from you on my poetry pieces ... much appreciated.. Linda-Marie, P.E. P.S. "Sweetheart" ..have u checked out HGarvey Daniel Esquire Daffy Definitions yet? much fun... hope u participate...

Lena Townsend

November 4, 2009 at 11:44 PM

You never need to say it outright as your words leave such a precise image. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful writing. As always it is prefection. Smiles from Lolita