The Garden Spider

Among the flowers of beauty bright,
Upon leaves of green I sight 
Graceful webs of intricate fashion 
Of labor and of passion. 
No architect so proud can craft this shroud; 
Its sticky vines of ensnaring gloom 
Tell little of an impending doom.  
Hidden fangs await the unwary,
The thirsty, the greedy; 
Entangled vivacity thrashes about 
With a dreadful shout. 
The spider’s banquet is short and rich 
As it savors every twitch. 
No prying eye will dare to spy
On death’s descending cry. 
At dusk it drops from a canopy sky 
To taste the spoils from its ravenous eyes.
Death wrangles a martyr, wraps it in twine
Then dangles it from a vine. 
Flowering sprouts enjoy the morn, 
Marveling at the horde of spiders born. 
A cloud of spiders take to flight 
On currents of air lassoed
Just right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 9:19 PM
A clever tribute. Well done. I enjoyed finding your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Jonathan, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Fantastic imagery in this! I'm not a fan of spiders, though. Congrats on your win, Jonathan!
Delaney Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Wonderful poem and win. I am a spider watcher myself. They give endless inspiration for poems. Cheers, SuZ
Eastman Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 9:22 AM
A perfect image and depiction of a Spiders life! Congratulations on the win!
Devnath  Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your top placement with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations Jonathan, loved the visual intrigue you wove...
A   Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Jonathan, , Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:00 AM
Way to go in the garden win..Congrats..Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:27 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, Jonathan ! - Well deserved first place! - (I have not participated in the contest for a while - like writing whatever comes to my mind.) - Have a nice day. - Be proud of your write :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Super visuals, Jonathan! Congratulations on your Awesome Win!
Gorelick Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Very nice..enjoyed. Think it might be a couplet or rhyme rather than a narrative. matters not! congrats. BG
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Fantastic take on the theme of the contest, congrats on the win, Jonathan
Hamilton Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 3:32 AM
great pen Jonathon congrats on win hugs
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Jonathan, Congratulations on being the number one entry in PD contest. Verlena
A   Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 1:53 AM
Jonathan, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 1:44 AM
am not the biggest fan of spiders ////00\\\\ but this was a superb write and a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:29 AM
Hi Jonathan, I can see why you like this, congratulations on your win love xx
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Congrats on your win, Jonathan
Bantawa Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:59 PM
congrats on your deserving win!
Konos Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:15 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
Harper Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 8:00 PM
Good mix of creepy and beauty Jonathan, congratulations on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 6:54 PM
I really enjoyed these charming rhymes! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Just right! Nice one and congrats. BG
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Jonathan congratulations on your fine win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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