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Desert Botanical Garden - Phoenix, AZ
Come and find me in this garden; I know not where the hours go. Palm fronds brush against my cheek – Lone toadstool, blush of mallow. They say this is the Garden of Eden – Rocks of lichen, red yucca. But I think this is probably heaven – Birds-of-paradise and vinca. You will find here a green shelter; Shade fills the inner sanctuary. Canaries whistle o'er yonder – Dew drops on a banana leaf. Let's be as kids like we once were; Take my hand, let's go find its end. Make a wish on a four-leaf clover – White passion vine, black-eyed Susan. Heaven can wait if we persevere. Let my bosom be your headrest. Morning glories open to the day; Sure feels like we're heaven-blessed.

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Date: 12/12/2023 10:41:00 AM
Amy your poem is a serene and enchanting portrayal of nature’s paradise, where the lush imagery and gentle rhythm invite the reader to lose themselves in a world of tranquil beauty. It’s a lyrical invitation to rediscover innocence and wonder within the embrace of an earthly heaven. - Blessings, Daniel
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Amy Michelle Mosier
Date: 1/16/2024 3:50:00 PM
Your name sounds like a poet's name, ha!
Date: 8/28/2023 4:34:00 PM
I love this. I can only imagine what it must have been like for Adam and Eve before the fall
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Amy Michelle Mosier
Date: 8/28/2023 5:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!

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