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---The Garden Bluebells

garden bluebells 
bow beneath heavy gaze
cupped dew falls

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:40 PM

wow...mesmerizing ..pd

Cherie Durbin

April 5, 2011 at 8:20 AM

Bluebells have always been one of my favorite flowers, Debbie, and you've eloquently expressed why I love them so!

Kash Poet

March 1, 2011 at 6:36 AM

Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win with this cute Haiku-----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

February 28, 2011 at 8:47 PM

HI, Deb, Congratulations. Let's see you do some rhymed haiku now, girlie! Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

February 28, 2011 at 8:25 PM

very pretty imagery, congrats on your win in the contest Debbie

Carol Fillmore

February 28, 2011 at 1:56 PM

A lovely scene of bluebells in your garden, Debbie! Congrats on your win in Carol's haiku contest:) Thanks for your congrats for Renewal's win, so appreciated!! I am so eager for Renewal (of spring)...it's snowing here today...again!! We just had a storm on Friday;( Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 28, 2011 at 1:07 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Debbie

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your win, this is just beautiful As Always, Shar

George Aul

February 28, 2011 at 10:12 AM

Congrats on your win..........George

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2011 at 7:24 AM

Congrats Debbie on your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry full of great imagery and warm lines luv.. enjoy..

Tahera Mannan

February 28, 2011 at 7:07 AM

Bow beneath your heavy gaze. Wow. Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 6:15 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Debbie. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

February 24, 2011 at 12:08 PM

because you entice me, lights!! dazzling 'ku..:) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit

February 23, 2011 at 9:59 PM

Very pretty writing, Debbie.

Charles Henderson

February 23, 2011 at 12:40 PM

soooo niiiiiice as my daughter would say. Ck out my last blog.

James Marshall Goff

February 23, 2011 at 11:25 AM

first...thanks for the suggestion to change my title on my senryu now titled "one more night" "salvation did give me hesitation first time 'round, ...gawd, I find myself agreeing w/you on a regular basis.....have I changed? gotten soft? certainly not sharper!!! maybe its u! ...oh...this poem, I see such intensity of human emotion deeply affected by these fragile bluebells, spilling their hearts....

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2011 at 11:47 PM

I enjoyed seeing this one, Deb. sounds like a dangerous gaze!

James Peranteau

February 22, 2011 at 6:47 PM

This write dear friend, captures the picture quite well ! Your thoughts were heavy dear poet, to the tune of enlightenment...I loved it dear poet ! much love, james