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You spoiled my coat with your vile contempt and relished your dung lit fires upon my shoulders I offered pristine views you gave a careless void disturbing me with your disgust turning my green coat a vacant brown, filled with death you stole from my womb for your own pleasure leaving empty husks of anguish turning light into a dark that burns upon my skin where death lays in comfort 9/1/17 contest Artwork painting of The Garden of Earthly Delights by Hieronymus Bosch 1515 a moral warning of paradise lost that leads to hell

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Date: 9/3/2017 8:58:00 PM
Oh my, you described that so well, Frederic. Good luck in the contest. He has quite a job before him judging this contest.
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Date: 9/1/2017 2:41:00 PM
That's not a nice person, border line evil. Descriptive write Frederic, well done...
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