The Garden

The Garden
By Curtis Johnson

Just before I went strolling through Eden in the early morning dew,
The owner of a most beautiful garden gave me a list of things to do

First on the list were all types of animals that I was suppose to  name
Little did I know that one of them would change and cause endless pain

Just when I thought that he had given me more than enough to manage,
He had more assignments, and my own plans quickly began to vanish

One day he placed me in his quiet and breathtaking garden.
So relaxed, I fell asleep and was awakened to a lovely bargain.

He had taken a part of me, and made a most exquisite lady.
Her presence saturated the garden with unspoken melody.

First thing I knew, she caused me to lose what I had gained.
She listened to the voice of another, and she was to blame.

We were terribly sad, because we were soon evicted from our happy home.
We dishonored and displeased the garden’s owner, and were afraid, lost, and alone.

Though he never ceased to give us compassion, love, and security,
Our lives were altered forever, having lost Eden Garden and our purity
Cj03012007PS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Christian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 12:20 PM
a good poem,
Merryman Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:36 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Curtis! I like how you wrote from Adam's point of view. Well done! Love, Kim
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your comments. May GBY. Curtis
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