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The Garden

* * * * i wonder when we are alone in the secret garden we roam windless, dying like a tomb, searching for a place to hide, does the flower feel the pain when the shepherd stops the rain? does she ever feel alone fighting and struggling on her own she knows she will lose one day but she keeps fighting anyway she thinks that the lord sees her and one day he'll put his mercy upon her but if there's no jesus christ who would irrigate them poor who whould save them from hell who whould stop them fading to black?

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Date: 2/3/2014 4:19:00 PM
Great piece!
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:56:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, thank you for sharing. Light & Love
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:16:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup,nice write.
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Date: 8/17/2013 8:16:00 PM
wow! Damien :-) what a thought .. Glad we have Jesus Christ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 8/17/2013 4:38:00 PM
Hi Damien, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:56:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Damien ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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