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The Garden

My body is the sacred ground You laid your soul to rest An immensely painful stone I've hidden within my breast The land a beautiful Garden That you could only dream But the soil much too dry To grow the life you had foreseen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2012 5:56:00 AM
nicely written, keep up the good work..
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:31:00 PM
Lovely write here Nichole...and congrats on your featured poem of the week!!
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:03:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nichole. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:19:00 AM
Nichole, I love this, it holds you till the end, well done, welcome to the soup, why don't you have a go at my contest, you get to know other poets work, any questions just soup mail me..david
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:38:00 PM
Lovely written Nichole, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Nichole Schindewolf
Date: 5/2/2012 8:05:00 PM
Thanks!! I can't wait to start reading some of your guys' poems! I'm having the hardest time navigating through :) I appreciate your taking the time to read my thoughts.

Book: Shattered Sighs