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The Gar

The Gar of very ghostly white Swam across the sky Until the fanbrush whisped him away Blending him into the sky blue-sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/8/2010 7:28:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read. What is a garr? Thanks for reading my poems. Always honored by you
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:10:00 AM
clever and the image blends in perfect. Hope the Garr found it's peace. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:03:00 AM
I like this image! Good stuff!
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