The Gar

The Gar of very ghostly white
Swam across the sky
Until the fanbrush whisped him away
Blending him into the sky blue-sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Always a pleasure to read. What is a garr? Thanks for reading my poems. Always honored by you
A   Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 6:10 AM
clever and the image blends in perfect. Hope the Garr found it's peace. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Sapp Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 9:03 AM
I like this image! Good stuff!
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