The Game's Not Played On Paper

Determination defies all odds that any gambler sets In the end, 'talent will out' ~ sure to lose the bet

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/30/2023 1:38:00 AM

Great advice my friend thanks for sharing....

John Lawless

Date: 8/28/2023 7:27:00 AM

OH, multi-faceted title for a wisdom laden pot....ante up ....

R J. Elless

Date: 8/28/2023 7:20:00 AM

Truth there, what we think turns on a dime. Or a Benji. Dont gamble myself. Have a Great Day.

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/28/2023 6:36:00 AM

Great powerful couplet Gershon with a great title and very true. Very well written two lines. Wise words that should be heeded. Many thanks for sharing.

Silent One

Date: 8/28/2023 2:06:00 AM

Wise words Gershon and so true.... you said so much in only two lines..

Ink Empress

Date: 8/28/2023 12:40:00 AM

What a deep and meaningful couplet! Very profound and conveys so much. I absolutely love the rhyme there and also how you’ve written “ the games not played on paper” impeccable