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Inspired by André Langevin’s novel “Dust Over the City”

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The Game

She couldn’t remember
When she stopped being herself
So gradual was the disillusion
He wore her down till she was just a shell
Another casualty to his ruses

He had fallen in love with her
A wild horse he wanted to dominate
Loved the challenge of the chase
A game determined to win

He caught her and tamed her
Till unrecognizably docile and meek
The shell of the woman she once was
Not unlike a male black widow
Had sucked the life out of her

Another trophy on his mantle



Read on air by invitation  ~  July 3, 2020  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Brewer Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:10 PM
A dark an bitter poem that has a ring of truth. Haunting painful images. Very impressive, Line
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey. Yes true, I much identified with the character of the book.
Kriticos Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Very dark poem here Line but so well done it drew me in :/ Oh how i love to see you in a free verse
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much. Indeed the free verse is a sensation of total freedom. Feels awesome.
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:44 AM
gosh, what a shame to be worn down that way by a man!! I don't know of this novel but you got a nice little poem out of being inspired by it. I often will see movies with an inspiring scene that causes me to write a poem like this. For some reason, I often turn to triolet for those types of poems!
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea. You being such a movie buff, I'm sure you never lack inspiration.
Goss Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Wow. Fantastic poetry. Really makes you think.
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Yup, there really are people like that - both sexes I would imagine. Thanks for your visit and comment, Christopher.
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