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The Future Me

Gloomy sixteen Yet seventeen, beloved gone You may young but you are strong I am the ghost of your future, so here I am You are twenty four, another beloved gone No worries, someone besides you Many obstacles will you pass Not easy, but quiet a journey People will betray you, but faith keep you sane Your journey will fill as hello and goodbye Be keen, be strong, be patient, keep the faith on You will not fail, because here I am, the succeed you  Regard, Future You December 27, 2012 ***************************************************************** 1st place Hello / Goodbye Contest Sponsored by: David Williams

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Date: 1/8/2013 4:37:00 PM
Yanny, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/8/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Linda, it would not be complete without your support :D
Date: 1/7/2013 7:37:00 PM
I love this intention.... Bravo
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Darren glad to see you here :D
Date: 1/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/6/2013 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, it's really nice to have you here too :D
Date: 1/5/2013 4:48:00 PM
wow, first place! BIG congrats to you. I had never seen this one yet. It's very unique!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/6/2013 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Andrea yours are unique as well, :D hug, yanny
Date: 1/5/2013 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Yanny!! Happy New Year and Good day! :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/5/2013 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Maria :D happy new year to you too :)
Date: 1/1/2013 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Ndaba, happy new year too :D
Date: 1/1/2013 8:21:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend, Yanny! Happy New Year, too! love and hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Leonora, congrats to you too :D, and happy new year :D
Date: 12/31/2012 5:47:00 PM
Yanny congrats on your win, you certainly succeeded, well done...David
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 1:53:00 AM
Thanks David, your contest is really interesting :D I really enjoyed it, happy new year David :D
Date: 12/31/2012 5:27:00 PM
Hey Future girl! Congrats on excellent win. Happy New year!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 1:53:00 AM
Congrats to you too :D
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 1:52:00 AM
Hello friend! :D thanks and happy new year too :D
Date: 12/31/2012 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations and a Happy New Year.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Menhaz :D Happy New Year too :D
Date: 12/31/2012 2:29:00 PM
Big congrats Yanny love, and all the best for the new year xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 1:50:00 AM
Thanks Mandy :D happy New Year too and all the best as well :D
Date: 12/29/2012 4:47:00 PM
This is good. Always have faith. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/29/2012 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Luci, Happy New Year to you as well :D
Date: 12/29/2012 3:25:00 PM
this is amazing Yanny,, have a happy New Year...
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/29/2012 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Harry :D Happy New Year too :D
Date: 12/27/2012 11:44:00 PM
Exceptional writing. I love the "be keen, be strong" line! Best of Luck to you!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 11:54:00 PM
Thanks Audonus :D best luck to you too :D
Date: 12/27/2012 6:57:00 AM
Oh too cute, Yanny. You can see the strong one emerge. Awesome. Good luck with the contest :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Toquyen your comment is always encourage me more to write :D

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