Yanny Widjanarko Poet Free verse

The Future Me

Gloomy sixteen
Yet seventeen, beloved gone
You may young but you are strong
I am the ghost of your future, so here I am

You are twenty four, another beloved gone
No worries, someone besides you
Many obstacles will you pass
Not easy, but quiet a journey

People will betray you, but faith keep you sane
Your journey will fill as hello and goodbye
Be keen, be strong, be patient, keep the faith on
You will not fail, because here I am, the succeed you 

Regard,
Future You


December 27, 2012
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1st place
Hello / Goodbye Contest
Sponsored by:  David Williams

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Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2013 at 4:37 PM Yanny, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd Yanny Widjanarko January 8, 2013 at 5:59 PM Thank you Linda, it would not be complete without your support :D

Darren Garmer January 7, 2013 at 7:37 PM I love this intention.... Bravo Yanny Widjanarko January 7, 2013 at 9:13 PM Thanks Darren glad to see you here :D

Debbie Guzzi January 6, 2013 at 5:55 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Yanny Widjanarko January 6, 2013 at 7:37 PM Thanks Debbie, it's really nice to have you here too :D

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2013 at 4:48 PM wow, first place! BIG congrats to you. I had never seen this one yet. It's very unique! Yanny Widjanarko January 6, 2013 at 7:36 PM Thanks Andrea yours are unique as well, :D hug, yanny

Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 9:34 AM Congratulations on your win Yanny!! Happy New Year and Good day! :) Yanny Widjanarko January 5, 2013 at 9:38 AM Thank you Maria :D happy new year to you too :)

Ndaba Sibanda January 1, 2013 at 1:34 PM Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year! Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 4:41 PM Thanks Ndaba, happy new year too :D

Len Gasun January 1, 2013 at 8:21 AM My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend, Yanny! Happy New Year, too! love and hugs, Leonora Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 4:39 PM Thanks Leonora, congrats to you too :D, and happy new year :D

David Williams December 31, 2012 at 5:47 PM Yanny congrats on your win, you certainly succeeded, well done...David Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 1:53 AM Thanks David, your contest is really interesting :D I really enjoyed it, happy new year David :D

Richard Lamoureux December 31, 2012 at 5:27 PM Hey Future girl! Congrats on excellent win. Happy New year! Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 1:53 AM Congrats to you too :D Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 1:52 AM Hello friend! :D thanks and happy new year too :D

Mehnaz Veetil December 31, 2012 at 3:33 PM Congratulations and a Happy New Year. Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 1:51 AM Thanks Menhaz :D Happy New Year too :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 31, 2012 at 2:29 PM Big congrats Yanny love, and all the best for the new year xx Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 1:50 AM Thanks Mandy :D happy New Year too and all the best as well :D

Lucilla Carrillo December 29, 2012 at 4:47 PM This is good. Always have faith. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year. Lucilla Yanny Widjanarko December 29, 2012 at 6:33 PM Thanks Luci, Happy New Year to you as well :D

Harry Horsman December 29, 2012 at 3:25 PM this is amazing Yanny,, have a happy New Year... Yanny Widjanarko December 29, 2012 at 4:06 PM Thanks Harry :D Happy New Year too :D

Audonus Taylor December 27, 2012 at 11:44 PM Exceptional writing. I love the "be keen, be strong" line! Best of Luck to you! Yanny Widjanarko December 27, 2012 at 11:54 PM Thanks Audonus :D best luck to you too :D

Toquyen Harrell December 27, 2012 at 6:57 AM Oh too cute, Yanny. You can see the strong one emerge. Awesome. Good luck with the contest :) Yanny Widjanarko December 27, 2012 at 7:41 AM Thanks Toquyen your comment is always encourage me more to write :D