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The Futile Quest To Reach Her Planet

In an unreachable galaxy light years away within a cluster of sparkiing diamonds in dazzling array She idly harbours her ravished bleeding heart away. Many men have tried to reach her planet board her shore carried her colours to battle for the Venus they adore Swearing undying love at her tender feet for ever more With no hope in store She's lost and so far away. Peter Dome.copyright.2014.Jan.

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Date: 1/10/2014 5:07:00 PM
Metaphorically Beautiful! Well done :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/11/2014 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Andres, really appreciate that. take care best wishes Pete.

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