The Fuss

There are the substantial and the oft insubstantial. Must we all be the same way, the same differential? There are mountains of atoms, there are eon's of space time. Yet, the importance, what matters depends on the climb. Does matter, matter? Are atoms are all of the rage! If we can't see a one, as it dances on this page! So do, believe as you will, and dream on as you must Just stop claiming you're the only right as you fuss.

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Johnathon Souders

Date: 9/28/2009 2:49:00 PM

Great Write , loved the message, hit a cord in thanks, Johnathon

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/27/2009 5:45:00 PM

ahhhh..... the nebulous life we live! great write! Deb!... and thanks for the honor in your contest!... jimmy

Brian Strand

Date: 9/27/2009 8:12:00 AM

Debbie thank you for the much valued placing in your dialect contest and for your welcome comments thereon today.Rgds Brian Looking forward to your next challenge here have a good day.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/26/2009 5:09:00 AM

Deb, I just have to say more... This poem is really EXCELLENT. It makes one look inside and think.... Thanks for sharing. Love to you. Dane Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/26/2009 5:07:00 AM

Debbie, Thought provoking poem_ I have spent most of my life pondering creation...down to the sub-atomic parts? Thus, creation, where we came from and where we're going is very substantial, to me. To another it is insubstantial. Thus diversity not only in life but in thoughts as well. What does it really matter anyway? We're here, we live, we die, and what's after that??? I guess we all have ideas and hope about that. I suppose if kindness and pure love should lead, we'll be ok. Dane

Sammy Shaq

Date: 9/25/2009 3:11:00 PM

Incredible write, I am glad to read such a lovely couplet. I am honored to have you by my side as a fellow poet and a friend. Completely original and meaningful. As usual, you never seize to amaze me Deborah Guzzi. Good luck with the future. Love, Sami.