Mourning Mist Poet Quatrain

The Funeral

I buried my wife that I loved just yesterday,
I thought she loved me the very same way,
After the funeral I stumbled upon a love note,
She loved another man and sailed upon his boat.

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Mourning Mist April 21, 2011 at 9:56 PM It is a sad reflection to know your greatest love whispered the same words to another in the same way.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 21, 2011 at 7:05 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. sad reflection to find such a note..on a sad note .. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

Mourning Mist April 21, 2011 at 6:50 PM Merci Beau coup, I just meant his boat of his heart or happiness

Michael Smith April 21, 2011 at 6:45 PM My sympathies go out to this man, but I can't quite understand why riding on his boat was so significant to the poem.