The Friend I Wanted

*Best friend*

On a shiny day
With a little pray
I asked for a friend
A friend who can be mine
To wipe my tears
To make me cheer
To show me way
Whenever I say
I asked the lord to send a friend 
Just the one who can be mine...

The one with deeds 
Who can lead
Make me feel 
That I have a zeal
A friend to listen me talk
Whenever I speak 
Whenever we walk
Whenever we share
I wanted a unique friend
Just the one who can be mine...

A friend of cheers
Who can wipe my fear
Make me feel safe
Whenever I feel bad
To make me smile
To give me care
A humble friend 
To tolerate me
I prayed for a cheerful friend 
Just the one who can be mine... 

Oh my God
I'm so thankful to Lord
He sent a friend 
More than I asked for
Who can bear with me
Whenever I stir his mind
Who is ready to fight
Whenever I am in fright
He gave me more than I ever asked 
For you are the friend He sent...

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Date: 4/4/2016 4:23:00 AM
Nicely penned. I Truly enjoyed.............
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 4/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 3/28/2016 11:19:00 AM
The way u write the poem is superb prati plz keep it up..... The poem is superb I like it very much.....
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you soo much...
Date: 3/27/2016 5:42:00 PM
Very nice
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/28/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot..
Date: 3/26/2016 10:01:00 AM
Pratidhwani, amazing free verse poem. The flow and need to ask for the gift of love is beautiful. A perfect 7 write... Luv. Linda
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot...
Date: 3/26/2016 3:29:00 AM
What a wonderful poem, Prati! I enjoyed it so much while reading it, and welcome to Poetrysoup, I look forward to reading more poems by you!:) best wishes to you and your friend, hehe.
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you soo much...
Date: 3/26/2016 2:55:00 AM
Pratidhwani Biswal, that's great to know, you are blessed with such a friend. SKAT
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 3:29:00 AM
Yes... Mee too feel that... Thank u...
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