Jim Smith Poet Rhyme Royal

The Freshness of the Dawn

...." The Freshness Of The Dawn " ...


Remember when your in pain , 
The beauty of every drop of rain ,
Or the sight of every day break , 
A glorious sight when you awake ,


The sun has started to rise ,
As a reddish orange glow fills the sky ,
There's a lovely quiet all around.
And fresh dew shimmering on the ground .


You know the day is fresh and new,
Feel the stillness is there just  for you 
Breath in the freshness of the morn
As mother nature gives you a new dawn 


Welcomeing you with open arms.
Showing you all of her precious charms .
Making you feel born again , 
Even in the light drizzly  rain ,


A tranquil quietness like no other
Like the bond between a child and their mother ,
When everything brings a smile to your face ,
And your proud to be part of the human race ....

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Dineen Williams Gault March 25, 2016 at 7:04 AM You made that freshness come to life with your crisp words. So tranquil to envision, especially when pain takes hold. Jim Smith March 25, 2016 at 8:15 AM Thank you so much for your comments and am pleased you like it with sleepless nights one can enjoy mother nature so I just put my words down take care x