The Fragrance of Rain

After the spring rain, the air's scent
Is like a sweet perfume
The essence of Wisteria
An aroma gone too soon

The clouds darken all becomes still
Quiet is deafening
Then boom lightning bolt flashes
A gentle rain dripping

The air is fresh, sweet, renewed
Cleansed of every stale scent
Like a new baby's presence 
Rain 'pon summer day sent 

Weeks without a fall cleansing rain
Dust and pollen flourish
Dry heavy stale air floats around
Plants need rain to nourish

Then a gentle rain starts to fall
A sweet aroma swirls
All God's creatures are quiet~ still
Fragrance of rain God's pearls

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Fragrance of Rain
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Written: November 16, 2013

Form:A type of  Poulter's Measure/ 8,6,8,6 with rhyme on the 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Lovely, fragrant poem, Sara! Congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Horn Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 7:03 PM
Sara, Your poem would be good if it wasn't so great. A wisp of wisteria sounds so soft and sweet. Poets should put down what motivated them to write a poem. What motivated you to write this one must have been rather unique and fascinating. [email protected] How did you find my poem so fast to read it? Also, thanks for your great comment about my poem.
That Archaic Poet Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Indeed, congrats on placing, Sara. Lovely poem you've penned, and I think you conveyed the wonderful scent of rain quite well; kudos :)
Deschler Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 8:19 PM
This poem is just lovely, Sara! A very enjoyable poem. I am so glad that you placed with this one! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
Sergi Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 5:43 PM
You paint a wonderful picture with your words I enjoyed this one very much Joe
Hamilton Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:14 AM
simply utterly lovely Sara I can smell the rain congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
A   Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Sara, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 8:33 PM
So glad this one won. It is well deserved win, Sara. Congrats to you.
Mehta Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, sara
Deschler Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 3:06 PM
A very beautiful poem, Sara! Very well described! I enjoyed the read! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the nice visit!
Hamilton Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:38 AM
how lovely this is Sara excellent pen gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
Guzzi Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Reads like a winner Sara! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Carroll Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Hi Sara, Well crafted and soothing write! Ken
Gasun Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 9:40 AM
A splendid and outstanding write my dear friend Sara. I can smell the therapeutic fragrance of the rain through your stellar write. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! love much and big hugs, Leonora
Sathasivam Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 5:18 AM
Excellent. Absolutely stunning write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 1:41 AM
wow, Sara you outdid yourself. EXcellent entry!
A   Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 12:23 AM
Sara, this is beautiful... wow! the sweet imagery feels like unconditional love... hugs..Linda
Adams Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 9:27 PM
this is beautiful Sara...i love a nice summer rain... the cold winter ones i can do without though....nicely penned piece...good luck in the contest :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:05 PM
thank you, sara.. :) huggs
Mohammed Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Great work Sara. Absolutely lovely!!
Gorelick Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 9:45 AM
We need rain so bad here in Ca. Loved your poem and expect a high rating. BG
Beharry Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Lovely aroma-filled poem! I can smell the fragrance of the rain! Great Write!
Sivey Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:06 AM
Nette will absolutely love this write my friend as I do too Sara! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, such an illustrious poem, Great Work!!
May Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 6:26 AM
the sweet scent of rain....nicely penned Sara
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