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The Fractured Vows

Once, so long ago, in love, we did believe A union was forged, forever to conceive But shattered dreams and promises untold Betrayal's wrath, our story now unfolds With heavy hearts and melancholic gaze Standing amidst the wreckage of our former joyful days A modern tale of divorce, so bitter and so cold Where disappointment's taunting grip takes a firm hold We danced on fragile grounds of counterfeit bliss Yet underneath the surface, the truth we couldn’t resist In adulthood's haze, we drowned in deceit A flurry of mistakes, too impossible to defeat Broken echoes of vows whispered in vain Their remnants directly haunt us with sorrow and pain We fought with fiery words that scarred the soul Till love's fabric unraveled, beyond any of our control Among the ashes of love now withered and decayed We each walk separate paths, hearts jaded and frayed Dishonesty's weight burdening our hollow chests A tragedy fully scripted wherein neither attests Anger festers within us, boiling in blatant rage Depression's embrace keeps us locked in a wedded cage Frustration envelops like a suffocating mist As the fragile tendrils of heartbreak cruelly persist We mourn for a marriage that could never be saved An illusion of forever now lost among the rapid waves In this modern world, where love can and will expire Our souls are left drowning in a sea of unrequited desire The bitter taste of farewell lingers on our cracked lips As we navigate the aftermath, with trembling, unsteady grips In the end, mistakes have led us both astray Two souls forever haunted by what we never could say *I wrote this poem on January 13, 2024, as part of a ’30 days of poetry’ January challenge. This was day 13 and the prompt was: “A ballad about a modern divorce.”

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Date: 2/2/2024 9:20:00 PM
Hey Courtney, The imagery you created and the emotions you captured are so raw and powerful. It's like you've opened a window into your soul, letting us glimpse your deepest thoughts and feelings. Keep pouring your heart into your words—it's truly inspiring! Can't wait to read more of your poetic creations. - Daniel
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 2/3/2024 7:55:00 PM
Thanks my new friend. The funny thing is I've never even been married or even asked. Always a girlfriend, never a wife. That's another subject I need to write about.

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