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The Roman Colosseum, Image from Microscoft

poem submitted to "1487" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, 7/10/2026

THE FRACTURED CROWN

The Colosseum sits~
a fractured crown,  
its arches a circlet of light
where jeweled sun gathers,  

I walk its perimeter, 
my fingers grazing limestone  
warm as living skin. 
Dust rises~  
a faint ghost of applause, of fear,  
of spectacle braided with longing.  
History here is not distant;  
it presses close, 
grainy and intimate.

The broken tiers curve
like a half-remembered sentence,  
one the empire began,
but time insisted on finishing.  

Grass grows where violence once bloomed;  
the sky claims the open roof  
as if to remind the ruin  
that even power must answer to light.

I feel a strange tenderness:  
noting how even magnificence erodes,  
how power becomes dust,  
how what remains is not violence  
but vulnerability~  
the open sky pouring through  
what once was sealed.

The Colosseum reminds me  
that time builds and erases in the same breath,  
and that beauty endures most fiercely  
in the places where the world  
has already learned how to break.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 4:14 PM
What a wonderful write/picture you have here. Love Both... "Good Luck" Have a Blessed Weekend Writing Away...........
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:45 AM
thanks, sweet Paula...wishing you well, hugs, sara
Poet Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 2:35 PM
Powerful ekphrasis radiates with hints of Roman history, with its Colosseum, famous for many atrocities throughout the ages! All things are very well covered in this poem. Great job, Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:44 AM
thank you, Sotto, for your kind words and continued encouragement
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