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The Four Seasons

spring walked the red carpet dressed in a suit of blossoming colors that released a delicate inviting fragrance. summer followed in a scorching hot vibrant green piece accentuated in bright yellow gold. autumn showed up in antique shades of reds and orange. a striking shawl dropped beneath her shoulders. winter was the last to arrive and appeared in a pure white evening gown. each and every sequence unique and separately sewn in. as each season complimented the red carpet all life showed up to marvel. Sponsor: Rick Parise Contest Name: Any Poem 12- line MAX

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Date: 11/20/2014 10:34:00 PM
I am SO glad to see this one on the winners' list!! big congrats!!
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:46:00 AM
Kudos Maurice, a great one you have here; decorating all seasons within stipulated lines(12 lines); this is fantastic,congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/17/2014 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this brilliant masterpiece Maurice.
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Date: 11/17/2014 1:30:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:13:00 PM
Great brush strokes to complete a beautiful picture!!!!CONGRATS!! I Enjoyed
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:25:00 PM
Congrats to you Maurice on this beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for the rich vicarious experiences you lovingly shared through this very creative and beautiful poem of yours my dear friend Maurice. I love it so much. I hope I can experience most of the seasons someday because we've only summer and rainy season here. Thank you so much for this gem. Also belated thanks for your kind visit and inspiring comments on my poems. More blessings! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/12/2014 1:08:00 AM
This is a very creative and unique approach to describing the changing seasons.... I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Well done, Maurice!
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Date: 9/11/2014 11:31:00 PM
Excellent! I love this description: "a striking shawl dropped beneath her shoulders."
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:23:00 PM
this is faNTASTic'o. a great red carpet tribute to the four seasons. Gosh, I thought you had a tribute for that R and B group of the 60's for a second!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 10:27:00 PM
You are right Andrea the group is how I thought of the title.
Date: 9/11/2014 7:17:00 PM
I love all your fout seasons ,but no one can beat the beat the enchanting imagery of your autumn' s and winter 's beauty.Adding this to my fvs cause its like a painting of finest oils.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
oh my goodness you are too kind for words. thank you for your support.
Date: 9/11/2014 6:42:00 PM
Creative perspective! I like it.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 6:47:00 PM
thank you cass.
Date: 9/11/2014 5:50:00 PM
stunning imagery to accentuate every season Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2014 6:01:00 PM
Yes Maurice I always ensure I am well protected - saying that Darren and I have 2 soup babies (Patrick and Grace) in a few short months of being together so I guess there must have been a bit of a cock up somewhere LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thank you did you practice safe read.

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