the fountain

Unforgiving crash against a gentle surface
The power falls harshly on the fragile reflection
The light shines on the face of her
But she ruins the image of grace with her roughness
Or so she thinks
Others look to her for their calm
Her tears tirelessly fall
If only she could see
The gentle grace she portrays
Then would she love herself
Then would she realize her worth
All she sees is her mistakes
She sees what ruins her face 
She sees the fragile reflection fail
As the crash comes rushing down 
She sees a girl crying 
She sees herself 
She goes to the girl and offers her help
She holds her hands and absorbs her tears
She asks the girl why she cries 
She quietly traces the delicate face 
Full of perfection and full of grace
If only you knew 
The sweet fountain cried 
That I understand you 
Truly and fully 
Understand you
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Agustin Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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