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The Forlorn

You desert me too Who in this unkind world of Self-seekers cares to Hold the shaking hands of A tormented, forlorn soul Sintra 21-01-2015

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Date: 10/16/2016 8:13:00 PM
What a pleasant surprise, such beautiful poetry!
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 5/19/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation Arthur. I am grateful. Regards. -Mohammad
Date: 1/22/2015 5:43:00 PM
A soul filled with compassion. How many in this world feel this way? A moving tanka Mohammed.
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/23/2015 7:53:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Connie. Happy New Year
Date: 1/21/2015 1:14:00 PM
I don't think I've ever read a Tanka before. Very nicely done.
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating my Tanka, Rachel. Tanka is a Japanese form of syllable based short poem of 5 lines. I have written several tanka's before. Search through my poems if you want to read Tanka or Haiku. Love. -Mohammad

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