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The Forgotten

Sad sons weep as brisk buyers pass
Night's deep darkness falls as poor boys beg bread
Bleak bosoms, sharing sad sobs,
Fierce floods wash through the dense dirt tonight.
Gray gloom hides those cold cries.
Sharp storms wake up grim, great hunger,
Hard hearts mock the pain of lost lives.





















Honored to place 2nd in the Alliterisen Poetry Contest sponsored by poet Joseph May.
Note: AI-assisted background art was generated solely to enhance the dark and somber mood of my original poem.
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Wolf Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 8:56 PM
Is it ok to cry now, Simmone? ... Oops. Too late, I was already crying halfway through.
May Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Nicely done Simone, Congrats on your win in my contest
Young Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! "The Forgotten" was a deeply meaningful piece for me to write, and matching it to the Alliterisen structure was a wonderful challenge. I really appreciate the win and you selecting my piece!
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:04 PM
What find poetry for humanity this is. Congrats on your well deserved contest win, Simone.
Young Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:16 PM
Thank you Andrea, for the kind words. 💕
Elza Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 3:09 AM
A powerful portrayal of the cruelty of indifference—suffering exists all around, yet the world keeps moving, while some hearts have grown too numb to notice.
Young Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 10:18 AM
Thank you so much for this beautiful reflection, Sandra. You captured exactly what I hoped to convey—the heartbreaking contrast between the world moving forward and the pain that gets left behind in the shadows. I deeply appreciate your insightful words.
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