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The Forever Dance

dance and song all day long still for moments then roaming blooms and fuchsia midnight rooms restless rapt wind rousing all to tango in orange mists of dawn or scarlet dusk
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Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:52 AM
- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:42 PM
Thank you for your gracious remarks, Anne-Lise.
Empress Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 4:40 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous, i love the picture too goes with the soulful poem you’ve written here. I love how descriptive your lines are , your use of colours and also alliterations really stood out for me. I especially loved “ then roaming blooms and fuchsia midnight rooms restless rapt wind rousing all to tango” magical! Mellifluous. Pleasure reading, congratulations on your win. Well deserved
Buehler Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Deepest thanks for your warm words of appreciation and congratulations. I thoroughly enjoyed your contest, and I am honored by my win. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Loved the tender vocabulary of your poem, Dear Evelyn. The images brought me joy!
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:16 PM
That is so nice to know, Mala. Thank you. :)
Greenhough Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:56 AM
Enjoyable thoughts.
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thank you so much.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 1:08 AM
Excellent poem, blessings.
Buehler Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Deepest thanks. :)
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Much enjoyed the rhythms of your grooving poem, my friend. Fabulous images succinctly delivered.
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Heartfelt thanks, Vijay. :)
One Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Two poems full of colour and vibrancy.. Good luck in the contest..
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Silent One. :)
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