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The Footfalls of Fate Premiere Contest Winner

The footfalls of Fate; pursue love and hate, through the echoes of silence. Yet leave surreal footprints hearts can feel; tracking peace or violence. Time creeps up on you; and nothing you do can alter its progression. Fate leads, you follow, it chews, you swallow; even dregs of depression. Each misplaced footfall or muted miscall; marks the trail that dreams pursue. Fate forges a path, while luck does the math; but that first step's up to you. You face Fate blindly; wicked or kindly, lavish or ugly and stark. Fate is seldom fair as it plays out there; like a shadow in the dark.

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Date: 4/10/2018 12:40:00 PM
What an amazing write Emile, I just love this form, it really lends itself well to the rhyme it is so very lyrical, which perhaps is why I like it so much, a worthy winner, you are at the top of your game lately!!
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Date: 4/10/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thanks so much John, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 11:53:00 AM
A lovely poem and wonderfully executed form. Well penned, Emile and congrats on your top win.
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 12:01:00 AM
what awesome rhyme, I've not seen this form before, many congrats on your top spot Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2018 8:01:00 PM
A new form for me. Congratulations on your win with this excellent rhyme, inspiring poem.
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 9:39:00 PM
Alouette...taught me something new..Thanks and Congrats!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 5:22:00 PM
Excellent write dear friend.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 10:13:00 AM
wow amazing poem, great form and rhythm and rhyme sweet poet! so happy to have read this one...thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, your comments and placement in your contest have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2018 3:19:00 PM
I love the poem, Emile but that 3rd stanza is my favorite in this poem. Fantastic writing as always!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel, your comments have made my day my friend, Emile.

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