The Footfalls Of Fate Premiere Contest Winner

The footfalls of Fate pursue love and hate through the echoes of silence. And leave surreal footprints hearts can feel from kindness to violence. Fate creeps up on you and nothing you do can alter its progression. Fate leads, you follow: It chews, you swallow, even dregs of depression. Each muted miscall or misplaced footfall, blazes trails dreamers pursue. Fate forges a path through glory and wrath; yet each step wasn't up to you. You must face Fate blind; whether harsh or kind, lavish or ugly, and stark. Fate is seldom fair, shapeshifting out there: like a shadow in the dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/10/2018 12:40:00 PM
What an amazing write Emile, I just love this form, it really lends itself well to the rhyme it is so very lyrical, which perhaps is why I like it so much, a worthy winner, you are at the top of your game lately!!
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Date: 4/10/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thanks so much John, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 11:53:00 AM
A lovely poem and wonderfully executed form. Well penned, Emile and congrats on your top win.
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 12:01:00 AM
what awesome rhyme, I've not seen this form before, many congrats on your top spot Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2018 8:01:00 PM
A new form for me. Congratulations on your win with this excellent rhyme, inspiring poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 9:39:00 PM
Alouette...taught me something new..Thanks and Congrats!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 5:22:00 PM
Excellent write dear friend.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 10:13:00 AM
wow amazing poem, great form and rhythm and rhyme sweet poet! so happy to have read this one...thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, your comments and placement in your contest have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2018 3:19:00 PM
I love the poem, Emile but that 3rd stanza is my favorite in this poem. Fantastic writing as always!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel, your comments have made my day my friend, Emile.
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