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The Fonder of You

Looking at you, a vista of life Seeing that smile relieves my strife Reading your words, caring total Like Autumn leaves, for you I fall Then there's the smile of Golden gown You can't swim, but for you I'd drown For you give me hope, far out yonder Look inside my heart, for you I'm fonder .

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/30/2014 10:18:00 AM

There is nothing more enjoyable then to read a great poet in love.

James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 5:00:00 PM

I've written quite a few poems Maurice, but this ones been an absolute joy to write. Thank you ever so much for your always lovely compliments. It sure makes me smile, James :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 10/27/2014 8:52:00 AM

Very in tuned with the sentiments of a woman...an excellent portrait displayed here.

James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 4:51:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely compliment Pace, James :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2014 2:52:00 PM

wonderful sentiments that warm my heart, prince.. this is so soothing!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Nette, it's about someone who's kinda Special. Have a most lovely weekend, James :) hugs :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/24/2014 6:52:00 AM

sweet, sweet poem :))

James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 2:32:00 PM

Blimey, all I'm saying tonight is thank you, and deservedly so to all the lovely comments my humble writes have received. Thank you Hija, golly, I hope I've got your name right, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/24/2014 1:43:00 AM

"you can't swim , but for you I'd drown.. ... " :) a vista of life... :) lovely sweet words.. :)!!!

James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 2:02:00 PM

You told me you couldn't swim, then suddenly a write from within - James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2014 5:19:00 PM

aww James this is so beautiful - who couldn't help but fall in love wonderful words like this:-) its a 7 from me Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 5:49:00 PM

It definitely does James:-) hugs Jan xxxx

James Fraser
Date: 10/23/2014 5:47:00 PM

Thank you kindly Jan, Autumn surely inspires words to replace the fallen leaves, James xxx