James Fraser Poet Rhyme

The Fonder of You

Looking at you, a vista of life
Seeing that smile relieves my strife
Reading your words, caring total
Like Autumn leaves, for you I fall

Then there's the smile of Golden gown
You can't swim, but for you I'd drown
For you give me hope, far out yonder
Look inside my heart, for you I'm fonder





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Maurice Yvonne October 30, 2014 at 10:18 AM There is nothing more enjoyable then to read a great poet in love. James Fraser October 30, 2014 at 5:00 PM I've written quite a few poems Maurice, but this ones been an absolute joy to write. Thank you ever so much for your always lovely compliments. It sure makes me smile, James :)

Pace Ink-U-Script October 27, 2014 at 8:52 AM Very in tuned with the sentiments of a woman...an excellent portrait displayed here. James Fraser October 30, 2014 at 4:51 PM Thank you for the lovely compliment Pace, James :)

Nette Onclaud October 24, 2014 at 2:52 PM wonderful sentiments that warm my heart, prince.. this is so soothing!.. huggs James Fraser October 24, 2014 at 3:42 PM Thank you Nette, it's about someone who's kinda Special. Have a most lovely weekend, James :) hugs :)

Hija De La Luna October 24, 2014 at 6:52 AM sweet, sweet poem :)) James Fraser October 24, 2014 at 2:32 PM Blimey, all I'm saying tonight is thank you, and deservedly so to all the lovely comments my humble writes have received. Thank you Hija, golly, I hope I've got your name right, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 24, 2014 at 1:43 AM "you can't swim , but for you I'd drown.. ... " :) a vista of life... :) lovely sweet words.. :)!!! James Fraser October 24, 2014 at 2:02 PM You told me you couldn't swim, then suddenly a write from within - James :)

Jan Allison October 23, 2014 at 5:19 PM aww James this is so beautiful - who couldn't help but fall in love wonderful words like this:-) its a 7 from me Hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison October 23, 2014 at 5:49 PM It definitely does James:-) hugs Jan xxxx James Fraser October 23, 2014 at 5:47 PM Thank you kindly Jan, Autumn surely inspires words to replace the fallen leaves, James xxx