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The Folding Fan Premiere Contest Winner

One foot here and the other there Celestial light shines down on the folding fan channeling the wind from North to East, to South, and lastly West Cherry blossom petals slowly rain and scarlet petals of dying flowers join the westward winds Another step here and another there This folding fan will guide the way on the path of faith, patience, wisdom, humility, and elegance in this sacred dance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/27/2018 8:05:00 PM
A lovely write.
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, V.S.
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, V.S.
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your top podium win! This beautiful piece reminds me of a wonderful book called "Snow Flower and the Secret Fan" in which Chinese girls used to communicate with each other in secret using their fans. Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 4/26/2018 6:44:00 AM
Back with more congrats on yet another win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:43:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Vermillion.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:44:00 PM
Vermillion, congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:30:00 AM
Great imagery in your poem, Vermillion. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/22/2018 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your expressions of descriptions.
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Date: 4/22/2018 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem, Vermillion. I love the imagery of the channelling. Superbly penned.
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Date: 4/15/2018 10:40:00 AM
A very beautiful piece that I enjoyed reading! I salute you, great poetess! Best wishes. Pandita
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